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Time To Pass by ~Fairy-of-darkness:iconFairy-of-darkness:

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As your pain starts to ease,
Your heart begins to slow,
You see a white light,
Thats when you know.

Your loved ones are near,
The room once filled with chatter,
Is silent now,
Then you hear a faint patter.

Your time has come,
Your pain has ceased,
You seek angels,
Your family, a priest.

Your pain has ended,
Your suffering gone,
You search for angels,
There's only one.

She's the  one that you want,
She's the one that you need,
Your the apple,
From her tiny seed.

You dont fear,
You dont fight,
You know what we've been saying,
You know that we're right.

The time is here
Your happy now,
You die in peace,
You take your last bow.
©2008-2010 ~Fairy-of-darkness
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Author's Comments

This has to be one of my most heart felt poems ever.
Its for my aunty Janet who is dying and in such agony she cries out in pain constantly. I wrote this as a spell to help end her suffering and pain. Hopefully she'll die peacefully with her family around her knowing she's loved and going to a better place. I just hope i can see her before she passes on.
(Note: i have changed this slightly from the spell i originally wrote so please dont use this for your own perposes. By all means if you want a spell for the greater good contact me and my friends at: myspace.com/Barsleywitchcraftcoven)

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~forgotten2 Jan 28, 2008, 6:02:00 AM
my heart goes out to you. i know how hard it is to lose someone to a disease that wastes them away, my great uncle had bowl cancer, the pain was so great for him in the end that he had to be sedated for the last two weeks of his life... my prays are with your aunt and yourself. take care luv jenna

--
This is the dreamscape,
A drowery of sin,
This is the Darkness,
Where nightmares begin.
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~Fairy-of-darkness Jan 28, 2008, 9:14:17 AM
Thankyou so much

--
I'll show you mine
If you show me yours first
Lets compare scars
I'll tell you who's is worse
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Mood: Sadness ~Crimson-Infliction Jan 28, 2008, 9:27:35 AM
this is a really good poem, really lets you release your inner feelings about what is happening around you. my love goes out to you and your family in this time, and let your aunt be blessed so that she does find her true angel that will take her onto the better place that is in her mind where she can rest and be free from pain, truely at ease.
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~Fairy-of-darkness Jan 28, 2008, 3:54:36 PM
Thakyou

--
I'll show you mine
If you show me yours first
Lets compare scars
I'll tell you who's is worse
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~byzantiune Jan 29, 2008, 11:59:21 AM
My heartfelt sympathy goes out to her and all the relatives. Hopefully with the love from all of u, it's gonna soothen the pain that she's having right now. May she die in peaceful..

--
"To handle yourself, use your head."
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~byzantiune Jan 29, 2008, 12:05:13 PM
My heartfelt sympathy goes out to her and all the relatives. Hopefully with the love from all of u, it's gonna soothen the pain that she's having right now. May she die in peaceful..

--
"To handle yourself, use your head."
:iconfairy-of-darkness:
~Fairy-of-darkness Feb 1, 2008, 7:59:18 AM
thankyou so much

--
I'll show you mine
If you show me yours first
Lets compare scars
I'll tell you who's is worse
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